I have a little time this morning, so I wanted to give some feedback to everybody. Hope we can use this chance to help each other improve. As always, if you don’t want any feedback, sorry. Just let me know and I’ll leave you alone next time.
Part 1/2:
Sabet
@Sabet I really like your textures on the cloth and the paper, and the paper has some nice crinkling, though it could maybe use another level of subdivision. I like the choclate texture too, though I think it should be a bit shinier to more closely resemble the reference.
Alexandra_Ispas
@Alexandra_Ispas I like the pastel color palette. The models are simple, but effective, as is the animation. Maybe a slightly different background color would be nice for more contrast, but that’s a nitpick.
Ethan_Martinez
@Ethan_Martinez I like the rock golem, but I really can’t see enough to know what’s going on in the scene because it’s too dark, even on my laptop with the brightness all the way up. Then again it may be my problem, because I’m away from home this week so I can’t check it on my desktop.
Enodes
@Enodes By “Don’t judge me” do you mean you don’t want feedback? I’ll leave you alone, just in case, except to say that it’s a nice scene!
Leon_V
@Leon_V It’s a good scene. I like the bottles in the windows, and the vending machine is cool. I think having the lamp right in the middle kind of throws off the balance of the image composition. I know it’s probably based on a real place, so this may be breaking the reality, but I think it would look better with the door and the lamp changing positions.
niladri_ghosh
@niladri_ghosh A really well balanced scene, in terms of both composition and color. You’ve got a lot of nice detailed objects, but not overly detailed for the low poly aesthetic. As I said earlier, I like how you stylized the window and door shapes. It gives it a slight fantasy/cartoon feel. I’m not sure how far this should be taken, though. Do all the rectangular objects need to be skewed? Probably not, but I think the air conditioner is an issue. It looks fine on its own, but next to the skewed door, their styles seem to clash.