I though something was missing from the scene so I added some revolver bullet casings. When I did the render I realized I had put way too much detail into it that you can’t even see. Oh well it was fun. I also realized that the exposer was taking away too much detail so I have turned it down a bit.
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Very nice scene.
Interesting concept. And I love the lighting
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I think it’s still too bright. I understand the sun burning at the sky, but the floor is to bright in my opinion.
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Bullet holes, arrows … luggage.
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Okay, so here’s my scene.
Once upon a time in Wild Wild West, there was…
…a Micah’s peace offering!
(The scene is from the RDR2 An American Pastoral Scene quest).
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Ohhh, I wanted a team of horses, driver and shotgun guard, Outlaws with guns holding it up. 
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Nice. But if it crashed surely it got looted too. Maybe if you open door? And To be picky out of spite 
Lamp would shatter glass in the impact like tis 
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Well, all the money you loot from it is contained within a tiny box, and the doors stay closed
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Well. They were lasy.
You can better them 
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Yea I see what you mean. I turned the same image into my background and it looks fine on my main 2K monitor but not so good on my second lower res monitor. With this almost white ground you loose a little detail on my main monitor but so much is lost on my second. I think I’ll leave it though because if there was more detail far out then you would notice that in the distance its not very far out.
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If you wanted to you could add a little more detail into the green part. A little more grass sticking up might make it look to the same detail of the water, rocks and coach. But I really like your scene and coach. I’ve played red dead my self. The tree cut down to block them, I can already see the shoot out waiting to happen. Really well done 
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Thank you And yep, background obviously needs some more detail. I’ll add them but first I need to check for @Mateusz what’s inside the carriage.
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Just open the door. Let us see what it will look like. For me it pushes more in to the story. " Some body was there doing stuff"
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You going back in to the forest. Following trail leading from the carriage. You meet shimmy bloke and he engages with his tale on how he looted this carriage and found that magnificent treasure that you happen to rally need. If you do quest for him he will give it to you. And you have bonus level.
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Spines through the hat are intended 
Your story is getting better! I like the approach very much.
But maybe … change the hat in a male flower shape (difficult I know).
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Thank you! I think I will leave it as is this time… Still proud of my cowboy hat However, I like your idea!
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And here’s my final version with all the feedback included
Added lots of plants to the background, dropped the lamp and opened the door (no good loot inside, though). And yeah, there’s also the money safe from the game now.
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I made a hole load of things and somehow it all doesn’t fit on one shot.
Campers looking for their mate.
And their mate neatly tucked in to the mining wagon.
He shouldn’t wonder from the camp at night…
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Great selection of things. I think the middle one gets most in well.
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