To make it more confusing to you (sorry!) I must say that I like the current composition of the image. The only change I would suggest to make is to align the rocket direction with the direction of the planetary discs.
I’m also not native English speaker so let me show it on picture:
red arrows show “movement” of planetary discs (or whatever that is ), the alignment of rocket movement with them (green arrow) would make stronger effect of movement in my opinion. This doesn’t necessary mean that simply rotating the rocket will make this difference, maybe rotating the discs will be better, maybe camera position needs to be changed as well.