I’m not English native speaking.
With “view look motion” I try to express the following.
Viewers look at an illustration and their eye (interest) zig zag over this image. From interest point to interest point. If you do this correct, you tell a little story inside this illustration. You try to guide the viewer in where he/she needs to look. That’s why the rule of thirds comes in place.
Your rocket flies in a positive direction (left to right for our western world) It’s flying to a star (direction),
the curve starting from this star then goes downwards and intersect with the planet. Which has a visual line and connection with the rocket. This is really good!! You guide the viewer.
But the crossing of planet and ring? is nearly falling outside the illustration (No rule of third).
This theoretical stuff is very difficult! If you are good in this, you are a real artist. Do not worry too much!!!
I’m from (german) Switzerland.
), the alignment of rocket movement with them (green arrow) would make stronger effect of movement in my opinion. This doesn’t necessary mean that simply rotating the rocket will make this difference, maybe rotating the discs will be better, maybe camera position needs to be changed as well.
