Try my Game :D and give me feedback

Hi! Just finished my text101!! Called it “The Secret of the Tomb.” It probably has a lot of typos or weird constructed sentences. English is not my first language and also I did it quickly to turn it in in a class at school. I’m planning to translate it later maybe. But mainly I just wanted some feedback and hear what you think! :smiley: Thanks

http://gamebucket.io/game/ae163f35-c5db-4984-ba19-a01a237b3b7e

Great writing for a person who doesn’t speak english as their native tongue - made me smile, especially “…it could have been more epic” and the end of the game “you win…sort of”. Good job.

Thank you so much! And yeah, I wanted to give it a comedic touch a little bit. :smiley: