First, here’s the updated GDD: https://1drv.ms/w/s!At3rfzIAIdT6h6VtTM_Cdb7j_Z6kvw
I shared a copy with my wife. She liked the idea and when I asked her what specifically piqued her interest she said that the story themes of moving out into space and cybernetics were fascinating to her. I found that helped to solidify even more where I should take the development of the story.
I would love to get more feedback.