Well made room, fancy two scree set up computer desk. Though shockingly all pink! 
If you create a room, keep dimensions in track as in the real world. Making it more believable.
That’s some incredible lighting wizardry like I’ve never seen before! Nice!
Beautiful contrast between the textured shiny wooden floor and the round carpet. Nice work, especially lighting, integrated images, beautiful bookshelf.
There might be an issue with proportions: the armrests of the chair are set quite low, and still reach above the desk. When set at an average height, armrests slide beneath the desk, so the desk itself looks too low, but it is very wide. The two monitors have wide screen proportions, but are set low as well, way below head level with reference to the chair. The bookshelf is also possibly too small but it might be a collection of game boxes rather than books, or only pocket books.
I LOVEd the clutter, which give a very realistic touch to the scene.