So, I played a bit with red light. It isn’t perfect yet, but I didn’t want to put tooo much time in it. Please give me feedback, because I really want to improve!
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Improvement is in the details!
And in the level of skills you have?
You could try:
- Add a score board (Lane numbers).
- The left right gutter is too big I think, always use references!
- The edges of the lane construct are too sharp
- Add more mesh data (subdivision modifier).
- Lane textures are nearly invisible in smaller screen sizes.
- Make it less glossy and worn out.
- Reduce noise.
- Add some motion blur (but that’s personal).
- Last photo is a bit strange, while the first one is more believable from the point of view of a user (player), standing at the beginning of a lane.
- The bevel of the ball holes are a bit sharp.
But, overall it is a very good example of this challenge. Well done!
Don’t stay too long at a challenge. There are more skill to learn. With that you can improve this scene always later.
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