Please try my Prison escape game. This is my first text-based game and I welcome feedback.
Thank you.
Terry Levergood 
Nice addition onto the original story, one little problem i found with it though was when i returned back to the cell after looking at the sheets having already taken the mirror. It then took me back to the 1st cell scene where i was able to pick up the mirror again.
Loved the Hasselhoff magazine though 
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Oh no - grrr. Clearly I’m not anal enough to test everything lol.
that’s kinda embarrassing.
Oh thank you. My favourite part is the losing the game after the lock is open, but you refuse to leave.
I’m not much of a story teller.
I also thought the magazine was amusing! Another little loophole, though- if you go back to the corridor after dressing up in the janitor’s outfit, you return to the original corridor scene and have to do the whole process of taking the hairclip, unlocking the closet, etc, all over again.
Hey,
thank you for your feedback. Oh man, not another one.
hehe, Oh well. I like to think the story works only if things are done in
one fluid motion, but yeah I didn’t know how to fix problems until the very
end, then never got back to checking everything.