My First Website

Hi Everyone,

I just created my first website, and would love some feedback. What do you think of the design and layout?

Mundane Games

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Good start for a website but please leave out the profanity! Thank you!

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Thanks for the feedback. Replaced word with ‘butt’

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Personally, I do not like it. And that for several reasons:

  1. The website has a very basic feel to it with some very odd design choices, in Google Chrome for example the logo is cut off in the header, the tips of the triangles are slices off. The background of the header has a dirty white color to it. Yet directly below it, the navigation bar has a pure white background color. The navigation buttons have a super wide margin on either sides, have a considerable margin at the top, yet are then placed rather close to the suddenly grey separator bar. The header of actual text has yet another color of grey attached to it. Now giving us blue, green and already 2 shades of grey. The e-mail address box is a bit difficult to tell, but it appears to be yet another shade of grey? The submit box is certainly a different shade of blue and green however.

  2. Upon navigating the website the user is confronted with constant sliding effects. Fun in a tech demo or as part of a portfolio showcase for something self-created. But on an actual website like this, it adds nothing.

  3. The source code of the website, it is an absolute nightmare. And likely also explains the reason on as to why the above two points are there. It reads prefab website all over, probably through a service like wix.com. And it shows.

All of this is not meant to be harsh, don’t get me wrong. But your website is like your greeting card, it is where first impressions are made. I would suggest to restart the design from the ground up. Look at some design portfolios available, e.g. from FullyIllustrated. Don’t even think about the HTML or CSS in this stage yet, just mock it up in e.g. Illustrator or InDesign. And once you have the look going for it what you want, translate it to HTML.

Looks nice!

its not loading for me :confused:

Not working for me neither

I get an error message. “This Site Can’t Be Reached”

The site looks good, but I can see that you need to do some work on it. Personally, I’m not a web designer or anything like that, and I can’t give you any advice, but I think I can offer you a lot of things related to digital marketing to increase traffic to your online site. After all, my job is SEO services. If you want me to help you, I’d be happy to do it. But it’s better to discuss it one-on-one. But I note that for the first time will do. Mats, of course, were too much, this is for the future.

A good site. Keep it up. Of course, some elements should be corrected, but for a start, it is good. It would be best if you practiced more, and you can also take some lessons to help you improve your skills. I can advise you to enter this site https://www.pixelchefs.com/what-is-seo/. Here you will find many tips on improving your search system, plus pay attention to the keywords you highlight to be found more efficiently and when someone is looking for something similar to initially over your seat. Good luck.

“Hmm. We’re having trouble finding that site.”
There are some problems with your site :frowning:

Your site looks good, but I think you still have something to improve. A website today can attract and also reject people. Personally I look at the design of the site, also at the information placed on it, at the color chromatics, the way the text is written and much more. The site should be adapted to the needs of the people who visit it. I am not a web designer, but recently I did a course in this field and I tried to create a website by myself for my store. I used some very nice website builders which you can find here https://www.boxmode.com/fashion-website-builder and I mean, I already have a few loyal customers.