My First Game

Here is the link to a text adventure game that I made. Give your feedback.


Congratulations on you first game!

I liked the story and the music was a great detail, just be sure to double, triple and quadruple check your writing, there are some grammatical issues here and there, besides that, the game is really cool, keep it up!

Edit: Consider creating an or account, your game won’t dissapear over there after a month.

Thank You so much for taking your time to review my game and giving advice…
And thanks for mentioning about the grammatical mistakes.

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