Crash landing in strange ruins. Focused on using basic shapes to convey the crash by showing the trail in the sand and debris, though would appreciate any tips on improving.
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Nicely done. My only comment is the green grassy color of the floor inside the ruins, rather than the same sandy color as outside the ruins, though perhaps a bit darker.
Not sure if here’s a back wall or not, but I think it should somehow match the sand/dirt outside.
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Thanks, I’m glad you pointed that out. The funny thing is, that green was actually supposed to be some kind of eerie glow, but I think I made it far too bright so it makes the ground look oddly coloured. I went back and built a tunnel in the background and tried to make the glow a little more subtle and gave it a dusty feel the second time around.
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Very nice scene, great idea.
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Yes, that looks much better. 
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Hello !
I like the overall scene and the spirit of the image.
Remind me a smoother Lego video game.
The only thing, I don’t understand is the crash landing.
Is it coming from inside the building or from outside ? I don’t find it clear on your image.
Is it aswell a crash from a plane or a car ? I suppose it’s a car or maybe not.
Maybe it will be interesting to add some pieces of a vehicle on the ground ?
And just about the trail, make me suppose about a car or ground vehicule, you should maybe add some randomness to it (like brutal turning at the end), just because a crash is always accidental, no ? Unless you have a bulldozer lol !
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Hey, thanks for the feedback! I’m a little late seeing this.
I put a few little broken pieces in there, but I agree, it definitely needs more so that it’s more self-explanatory. I’ve learned a lot since I originally put this together and might come back to do an updated version for fun when I have a little downtime.
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