Any critique is welcomed 
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I think it’s great. The style is uniformly executed which can be difficult to do. I’m not sure how much if anything I would change but here are a couple thoughts.
- The thatch roof is well done. I like the minimalistic cuts in the side to sell that it’s thatch. I would maybe put a couple of those on the top roof too and see how that looks.
- The lights appear to all be emitting light of the same color. I would play with that a bit. You could change them slightly to break up the uniformity or push the “fantasy” angle and go with some more exotic colors. If you decided to do that, maybe consider putting a second render together with some more moody night lighting?
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Thank you for taking the time to give feedback, I really appreciate it!
I agree in both points. Personally, seeing it now I also think the emissions from the windows are too high, and also the door could be better (maybe with some cuts also and a different color/texture).
Again, I appreciate the feedback. I strongly believe that to become a better 3D artist (or at anything), you need to put yourself out there (even though it’s hard sometimes) and learn from your mistakes or improve upon what you already made.
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