Ok, I can see where you’re going with that (no pun intended). Here are a few differences I’m noticing (not necessarily positive or negative, just differences) - maybe something will help you pinpoint exactly what you would want to do with it if you decide to continue. The center eye in your model:
- Isn’t almond-shaped the way humans expect an eye with eyelids to be
- Has a different eyewhite colour vs the rest of the eyes (and furthermore, it’s darker and has less saturation. That alone would cause the other, brighter eyes to take the audience’s focus away from this eye).
- Has teeth (this is awesome)
- Appears very matte for an eye, where eyes are normally quite glossy. You can see this in the original Moon Lord sprites in the form of specular reflections on the top-left and bottom-right of the pupil.
I hope you’re feel proud of this sculpt either way, because I genuinely think that especially at your self-admitted skill level, you’ve done a very fine job of it!