This was great! The story was intriguing and I really like the background image and the font!
There are some things (similar to my game) where you wrote the text as if the user did something first, but if they don’t do it, it doesn’t make sense (if you get the mirror and THEN go to the door it says that I’m trying the door a second time).
Also (and I had this problem too), run through the game and you will find spots where the story text pushes your options below the bottom of the screen, leaving the user hitting random keys to try and get the game moving again.
Really nice job, truly!
Jason