Thanks for your feedback @David_Gibbs. Your comments are very much appreciated. I will try to pay more attention to contrast and readability of text in the future.
Apologies for the length of the following attempt to explain my thought process with the ‘story’.
On your point about there not actually being a story, I must admit that I completely agree with you. I actually had grand ideas about paths that could be taken, including one where you end up genetically mutated by the virus but manage to escape with unnatural powers to use for good or bad. Another where you succumb to the virus but are ‘reborn’ as a drone created by the virus and can start hunting the survivors throughout the building and one where you are able to get out unscathed but may now be a carrier of the virus or the virus got out with you.
I wanted a dark theme to it, although I tried to inject some comedy - quite possibly only funny to me though . Every outcome, even a win was always going to be a double edged sword as something like this can never really be fully contained.
When it came to actually fleshing the story out though, I realised that it would be a massive undertaking, possibly months of work which I am not ready for right now - mostly because I am really eager to get cracking with the next section of the course.
My solution was to go for a worse case scenario approach that there is no way out of the situation. I realise now that was not the most inspired decision I have ever made and makes for an incredibly uninteresting experience for the player. I have gone from too much story for me to be able to handle to none at all.
I really need to figure out how to set my own expectations for these projects and find some kind of middle ground where I can be happy with what I have created without going overboard or cutting things back so much that there is not really any content beyond a pretty interface. I would like to thank you for pointing this out to me.
I hope that the game does at least show that I have understood the mechanics of the lecture and it technically does work, even though there is no real content in there beyond, as you said, picking the way you die at the start.
Thank you again. I really appreciate you taking the time to have a look at the game and provide your valuable feedback.