@benu Congratulations on your winning entry on this week’s freak show. I must say you’ve nailed it. It’s a freak on display (show) and it tells the story very well.
- Cathy_N - I think the way you’ve placed the legs, makes it less fluid. Normally the visual has a flow. Lines of view to guide the user. The legs are crossed.
- Oloztarr - I love the texture, it’s like clay. The figure could be a character in a cartoon. But I miss some margin (ears). Pay attention to the overall composition.
- Tyger2 - Such a nice progress, and idea. Skin is too pink (subsurface scattering). It’s more like wax. Needed more time …
- Kzanna - Great idea! try to use vertex paint to smooth out the paint. It’s easy to do.
- TheDespicableDM - Nice model and composition. But I miss the reference to the subject.
- Gordon - It’s a freak for sure. A bit more lighting on the front. The blueish glow will still be visible. But then we see the creature’s details better.
- Joey_Cuevas - It’s more fun than freak because of the smile. Some sort of cookie. The basement theme is a nice idea.
- Willrun - Ninja Turtles comes to my mind. Play with more ceiling lights to create an atmosphere. Adding details like rats, and sewage dirt.
Note: I don’t want to offend anyone for any reason. I try to write down positive ideas and visions that I have in my simple use of the English language. I am also sometimes more inspired by a particular subject or solution. I’m also learning from you!