Here is the link to my zombie adventure game, enjoy and I’d love your feedback.
http://www.sharemygame.com/share/efc6adfd-36a6-4f82-abc1-7033b8408fff
That was great. I would just proof read your story and check for grammatical errors, and the background color was a little bright and brought me out of the story sometime, but that might just be me, but other than that it was good.
Thanks a lot for your honest feedback 
I’m working on another project but I will get back to this project to enhance the story and also work on graphically.