Text Adventure Game - "Bump in the Night"

Hey! Here’s my text adventure game, “Bump in the Night”. It’s a survival horror - hope you like it. I’d love any feedback you have.

http://www.sharemygame.com/share/56dff598-ee2a-4e54-b81c-2f4cd77a9d6c

Thanks!

Hi Mikegull,

Great job finishing the Text101 game. I loved the overall theme and style of writing that you used. It actually drawed me in quickly into the story. So far I only see two things that could possibly be improved.

The first is the font, although contributing to the theme, also makes it a bit harder to read the text. If there are any similar styled themes that are easier to read I would test it out.

Having said that, the second improvement would be to add more content. I would love to play through and explore the world that you have started to create.

Well done!

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Thanks for the comments!

It’s funny you say that about the font, because I was definitely concerned about readability after choosing that font. I’ll revisit the font I chose, and see if I can’t find something more clear.

As for content, I agree as well - it’s a rather short game. If you’re interested, I can certainly add more content. I’m glad you had fun playing my game! :smiley:

Hi Mike,

I’d love to play through some more content if you want to spend the time on it. The overall feel of the game reminds me of an old-school vampire game I used to play when I was a teen. I have forgotten the title but you have some good stuff going for your text adventure :slight_smile:

Hi Mike,

I really like the idea of your game and hope you continue to add more to it. It is very interesting and I am a big
horror fanatic and the story really took me into the game. I would love to see more.

D: I died. And I really should go to bed, but I want to play until I win. I’ll have to play it again tomorrow. Congrats on making a really creepy game that I should not have clicked on just before bed.

I did it! It was way less scary in the morning.

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