Hey! Here’s my text adventure game, “Bump in the Night”. It’s a survival horror - hope you like it. I’d love any feedback you have.
http://www.sharemygame.com/share/56dff598-ee2a-4e54-b81c-2f4cd77a9d6c
Thanks!
Hey! Here’s my text adventure game, “Bump in the Night”. It’s a survival horror - hope you like it. I’d love any feedback you have.
http://www.sharemygame.com/share/56dff598-ee2a-4e54-b81c-2f4cd77a9d6c
Thanks!
Hi Mikegull,
Great job finishing the Text101 game. I loved the overall theme and style of writing that you used. It actually drawed me in quickly into the story. So far I only see two things that could possibly be improved.
The first is the font, although contributing to the theme, also makes it a bit harder to read the text. If there are any similar styled themes that are easier to read I would test it out.
Having said that, the second improvement would be to add more content. I would love to play through and explore the world that you have started to create.
Well done!
Thanks for the comments!
It’s funny you say that about the font, because I was definitely concerned about readability after choosing that font. I’ll revisit the font I chose, and see if I can’t find something more clear.
As for content, I agree as well - it’s a rather short game. If you’re interested, I can certainly add more content. I’m glad you had fun playing my game! 
Hi Mike,
I’d love to play through some more content if you want to spend the time on it. The overall feel of the game reminds me of an old-school vampire game I used to play when I was a teen. I have forgotten the title but you have some good stuff going for your text adventure 
Hi Mike,
I really like the idea of your game and hope you continue to add more to it. It is very interesting and I am a big
horror fanatic and the story really took me into the game. I would love to see more.
D: I died. And I really should go to bed, but I want to play until I win. I’ll have to play it again tomorrow. Congrats on making a really creepy game that I should not have clicked on just before bed.
I did it! It was way less scary in the morning.