Hii guys it’s the first basic game I created. Its story is very short and not good but I mostly practice coding so please give your feedback. Thank you.
https://sharemygame.com/@Magster/abslinda
I am very new so I really do my best in the upcoming games.
I really like it. Nice job! You could try to improve the English in it and maybe don’t use Numpad as the input as some people might find that a bit confusing but otherwise I really like it! Keep it up with the gamemaking! 
thank you so much but I am mostly trying to make a 2D platformer and will improve it and sorry for my English because I am from India and don’t know that much English.