Here it is after roughly a day and a half of work.
It’s not very convoluted or anything fancy, however.
Ayway, I particularly enjoyed this excercise. I learned a couple of things I didn’t expect:
- I tend to loose myself in unnecesary descriptions and information. I gave myself a general line limit and it was rare the state where I didn’t cut or reword content to fit that limit.
- It was a wonderful feeling to start the excercise with a couple of vague images of what I wanted to accomplish and once I started pulling the strings lots of new situations and ideas I didn’t even think of them before starting popping into my head.
-This excercise is rather tiny in the grand scheme of things, but I have had a glimpse on how actually challenging writing for big projects must be.