I would like some feedback for my text adventure game

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I just wanted to share my text adventure game. I did something completely original and I’m looking for some feedback on 2 points.

link: https://riukanojutsu.itch.io/the-darkness

  1. What happens at the end, in your opinion.
  2. Do you understand why the last word is written the way it is.

Thank you for your time.

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Hi,

Nice story.

As requested;

  1. I believe the protagonist dies.
  2. Yes - but I won’t say as it may spoil it for others :slight_smile:

I spotted a couple of minor typos in the text, some spaces missing after full stops, perhaps from where the text is concatenated in code.

I like the font that you have used for the title.

Well done on completing this section, creating your own version and publishing to itch.io :slight_smile:

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Thank you very much for your reply.

  1. Now that you mention it, it seems very obvious that it seems that this story is about the death of the protagonist.
  2. Great. I have showed this a couple of people and so far everyone was puzzled but didn’t manage to figure it out. I was starting to wonder if it was too cryptic.

I will have to look into the space issue. It is most certainly because of the concatenated sections of text in my code. Doh.

Again, thank you very much for your feedback.