This is my first attempt at making a game let along telling a story. Let me know what you think.
http://gamebucket.io/game/70915b1a-3ead-44bf-a218-248e8e49f198
A few odd typos but solid!
Maybe you could add a counter to the number of actions the player has taken, if they have taken too many the prison will get flooded and the player dies.
This feature should have some indication, maybe an extra paragraph stating how dangerous is the current water level.
Keep it up