https://gamebucket.io/game/7864e4e8-ac22-48a3-b3fe-91fe0e533f26
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Great game, I laughed out loud a couple times. I liked your styling of options into a menu format. If I were to go back to my game I would probably incorporate that.
In the passages of text that stretch out a long time, you may want to consider adding some manual line breaks to make them easier to read, or break them up into a couple states. My eyes got lost about halfway through the full page texts.
Overall a solid text, with a good flow of plot that makes sense.
Very good! A few typos, but very good!