I added some extra fluff. Getting the particle fields to work as I wanted and to be able to turn them off and on as needed took some time, but what really drove me nuts was getting the sound effects to work correctly. Literally took me two days of trying different methods, the key was tying the sound effect trigger to the key press.
I also added a second box, one for text story and one for story choices in both the scriptable object and the main script, it saved a lot of time with formatting and I think made it look a bit nicer. (There is a 3rd box for “trigger key words” that turn the particle feilds on or off as needed but that’s all behind the scenes)
The story itself was expressly written for my six year old daughter, she loves the story and the game, I don’t expect a lot of other people too. But I’m sharing it anyways If anyone has feedback I’ll take it, if you have a six year old they might enjoy the game more than you
Edit: All SFX are royalty free/licensed for any use. I’m obviously not going to make any money off this game, but just wanted to clarify that.